I really enjoyed how we used the symbolism of the elephant as something that occupies space, something so present that everyone has to reorganize their lives around it. I also feel that weโre all parallel as people, as beings, living through our own parallel realities. Itโs not necessarily about who is the oppressor, who is the victim, or who is the observer. Maybe we are all of them. Maybe we are everything.
this is SOO GOOD !! the more i read your words, the more i admire ! Good lord, you are extraordinarily talented ๐๐ซถ hugs hugs and love only ๐ณ๐ซ๐๐ซต๐ซถ
When I die, mahibah, please write my obituary. Good lord, how do you do this every time ๐??? And while I'm giving you a tight spiritual hug through cyberspace, I have to tell you the way my jaw fell reading this.
oh my god, mary you are truly one of a kind! hugging you right back ๐ซ thank you so much for reading and commenting these kind words ๐ญ๐ญ i am honoured but i think iโd be sobbing far too much to write any coherent lines for your obituary ๐ป
This is so well-written! Day by day, Iโm getting addicted to your poems. Lol, every time I read one of them, I learn new vocab๐ญ.. Girl, I really love your poems! Not just for the sake of saying it, I truly love them๐ฅน๐ค
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i loved this so much holy shit!!! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
thank you so much!! ๐๐๐
your anger really shines through ๐๐ฅโค๏ธโ๐ฅ
YAYY!! glad you felt it ๐คญ๐โโ๏ธ thereโs more where that came from hehe
I really enjoyed how we used the symbolism of the elephant as something that occupies space, something so present that everyone has to reorganize their lives around it. I also feel that weโre all parallel as people, as beings, living through our own parallel realities. Itโs not necessarily about who is the oppressor, who is the victim, or who is the observer. Maybe we are all of them. Maybe we are everything.
yes exactly, you read what was between my lines! thank you so much for taking the time to share your perspective <33
This is amazing!!
thank you so much! ๐ made my day hehe
ugh must you be so poetic or whatever (donโt stop please)
iโll try to never stop hehe ๐คญ thank you so much mia! ๐
this is SOO GOOD !! the more i read your words, the more i admire ! Good lord, you are extraordinarily talented ๐๐ซถ hugs hugs and love only ๐ณ๐ซ๐๐ซต๐ซถ
THANK YOUU SO MUCH!! you are so incredibly sweet, wish you all the best <33
When I die, mahibah, please write my obituary. Good lord, how do you do this every time ๐??? And while I'm giving you a tight spiritual hug through cyberspace, I have to tell you the way my jaw fell reading this.
oh my god, mary you are truly one of a kind! hugging you right back ๐ซ thank you so much for reading and commenting these kind words ๐ญ๐ญ i am honoured but i think iโd be sobbing far too much to write any coherent lines for your obituary ๐ป
This is so well-written! Day by day, Iโm getting addicted to your poems. Lol, every time I read one of them, I learn new vocab๐ญ.. Girl, I really love your poems! Not just for the sake of saying it, I truly love them๐ฅน๐ค
jasla you are soo sweet oh my god! thank you for reading and commenting, you really made my day ๐คญ๐
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did i ask? your love does not interest me, i wish you the best but do not interact with me ๐
if they blocked you, maybe they aren't interested in you - shouldn't you let them go if you love them?
why donโt you love me?
is it because you donโt like my writing?
i like your loyalty and i try not to impress on they โ but i think they like me anyways ๐คทโโ๏ธ